The second one
By: Braden Buschhorn
Joe one day was driving down Highway 25 headed to Hailey, ID for his job and saw a red truck headed right towards him on his side of the road. He turns off the road and hits a telephone pole and flies right through the windshield. Then when he woke up and saw a tall black looking figure and said,” You’re early.”
Joe asked, “What did he mean by early?”
The tall figure said, “you weren’t supposed to be here for another 8 years.” Joe was confused with everything going on and didn’t know what to do.
Joe asked, “What happened to him and what was his name?’’
He said, “I’m the Grim Reaper and you hit a bolder and flew out of your windshield and hit a medium size rock and got put in a coma.” Joe started to cry and started to think about his friends and family. Joe decides to see if he could make a deal with the Grim Reaper. The deal is if Joe could impress him than he would be able to be alive again. Joe had an idea to impress the Grim Reaper
Joe asked” can I use anything to impress you?”
Grim Reaper said “you can use anything just as long as you impress me”
Joe asked “can you get me a fiddle please”
Grim Reaper “yeah I will be right back”
When Joe was younger, he used to play the fiddle he was the best in the United States. Once his wife died, he quit playing because when she was alive, he used to always play for her, and she loved it. He would try to pick one up and play it again, but he just couldn’t because it would remind him of his wife. So, when Joe remembered that he used to know how to play and that he was the best at it he decided to impress the Grim Reaper with the fiddle. It still hurt him to pick the fiddle up, but he just kept thinking in his mind that this was for him to stay alive and get back to his family. Joe wants to play his best song so he can impress him and get back to his family. As soon as he started playing, he realized that he had forgotten how to play the fiddle. He tried to remember how to play but he just couldn’t, he kept trying and trying until he just gave up and asked the Grim Reaper
Joe asked “do you have anything else I can use”
Grim Reaper “like what do you want to use?”
Joe asked, “do you have a jump rope?”
Grim Reaper “yeah I do hold on”
Joe remembered that he knew how to up rope really good back in high school, and he knew how to do tricks and how to jump rope for a long time. Joe just hoped that this would work so he would be able to go back to his family
Grim Reaper “here you go”
Joe started to jump rope and do tricks
Grim Reaper “WOW!! That was impressive”
Joe “really?”
Grim Reaper “yes now you may go back to your family”
The Grim Reaper returned Joe back to his family that say day. Joe and his family where really happy to see him but really confused. Joe just kept what happened to his self.
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
By: Braden Buschhorn
Joe one day was driving down Highway 25 headed to Hailey, ID for his job and saw a red truck headed right towards him on his side of the road. He turns off the road and hits a telephone pole and flies right through the windshield. Then when he woke up and saw a tall black looking figure and said,” You’re early.”
Joe asked, “What did he mean by early?”
The tall figure said, “you weren’t supposed to be here for another 8 years.” Joe was confused with everything going on and didn’t know what to do.
Joe asked, “What happened to him and what was his name?’’
He said, “I’m the Grim Reaper and you hit a bolder and flew out of your windshield and hit a medium size rock and got put in a coma.” Joe started to cry and started to think about his friends and family. Joe decides to see if he could make a deal with the Grim Reaper. The deal is if Joe could impress him than he would be able to be alive again. Joe had an idea to impress the Grim Reaper
Joe asked” can I use anything to impress you?”
Grim Reaper said “you can use anything just as long as you impress me”
Joe asked “can you get me a fiddle please”
Grim Reaper “yeah I will be right back”
When Joe was younger, he used to play the fiddle he was the best in the United States. Once his wife died, he quit playing because when she was alive, he used to always play for her, and she loved it. He would try to pick one up and play it again, but he just couldn’t because it would remind him of his wife. So, when Joe remembered that he used to know how to play and that he was the best at it he decided to impress the Grim Reaper with the fiddle. It still hurt him to pick the fiddle up, but he just kept thinking in his mind that this was for him to stay alive and get back to his family. Joe wants to play his best song so he can impress him and get back to his family. As soon as he started playing, he realized that he had forgotten how to play the fiddle. He tried to remember how to play but he just couldn’t, he kept trying and trying until he just gave up and asked the Grim Reaper
Joe asked “do you have anything else I can use”
Grim Reaper “like what do you want to use?”
Joe asked, “do you have a jump rope?”
Grim Reaper “yeah I do hold on”
Joe remembered that he knew how to up rope really good back in high school, and he knew how to do tricks and how to jump rope for a long time. Joe just hoped that this would work so he would be able to go back to his family
Grim Reaper “here you go”
Joe started to jump rope and do tricks
Grim Reaper “WOW!! That was impressive”
Joe “really?”
Grim Reaper “yes now you may go back to your family”
The Grim Reaper returned Joe back to his family that say day. Joe and his family where really happy to see him but really confused. Joe just kept what happened to his self.
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
- Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific.
- Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
- Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
- What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
- What does this paper show readers about you?